A hint of inspiration.
Date: Jul 24th, 2006 9:11:49 am - Subscribe
Music: The sounds of morning.

An open window stretches from horizon to horizon. Countless specs of light shimmer down upon puddles of an early rain. Their light glistens off of the drops of water that dive through the leaves of trees. The water creates an echo as they hit that races into the streets.

Shifty shadows lurking in the corner of vision send the illusion that you're not alone. Desperatly searching for light, the eyes begin to cheat and create figures that dash out of sight once they have been spotted. Dull transparent blades pierce the fog that hovers above the ground.

Dust bones lay quiet in the cemetery lots. Graves create a library of memories and secrets that have disentigrated in the fast flowing stream of time. If only the dead could see the stars tonight. If only I could see the stars tonight.

Bullfrogs, cicadas and crickets sing broken yet beautiful notes that create the music of the night. Tranquil sounds of warmth spread across the water, through the cat-tails and into the dead of night before disolving into a faint echo. The only orchestra that will follow you no matter where you go.

Metal spokes revolving around and around carrying the body in control. Wet rubber speeding on top of pavement that is just as wet. A deep voice remains silent while a racing mind works feverishly to describe itself poetically. My mind drifts across the canvas of the sky with open sails to catch the winds of time. Soar across the fourth dimension, leaving my body behind.
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hummus88 - July 24th, 2006
Wow! Amazing. I really felt like I was there. You have great powers of description.

silentrain - July 24th, 2006
Every time I read something of yours, I am never disappointed.

Once again you've created this world that, although it sounds familiar, it has never been described in such a beautiful way that causes the reader to believe that they've entered a separate reality altogether.

A reality that sounds free, and a complete pleasure to be sucked into and away from the one we live in.

You are a phenomenal writer- have I told you that before?

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tron - August 06th, 2006
thats really beautiful.

anonymous - August 27th, 2006
I will start a publishing house, and you will write epics.

Sorry anonymous, this user does not allow double comments to be posted.