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The wonders of 4th year...chapter 13 Aug 7th, 2007 3:05:57 pm - Subscribe
Mood | pmsy

Woo...it's chapter 13 *does happy dance*. I promised you it would come. Enjoy...oh and btw I put pmsy as my mood cause it looks cool...not because I actually know what it means XD

Chapter 12 review:

"We have good new and bad news. Which do you want first?"
"Good news" Me and Janet say together.
"The good new is that we've got your friends breathing stable. Bad news is that he's in a coma. We've no idea when he's going to wake up. I'm sorry," He stares at us waiting for a reaction. I sink into a chair and Janet bursts out crying and I promise myself one thing. Luke's going to regret he did that...


Chapter 13:

I'm still lying in a coma. I don't want to want to wake up. They're all standing round me and I open my eyes. Everyone speaks to me and I say goodbye to them all...I just ignore her. It's too painful. I feel my last tears before I let go...then silence...

All I can see is darkness. I like the dark but I don't like this. I desperately try to find a way out but I find I can't move. Then I hear someone crying. I slowly open my eyes. It takes all my energy to see who's crying. My family's around me not acknowledging that I'm awake. Janet is the one I hear crying. She is staring at a picture of a boy with messy, dark hair lying in a hospital bed. Obviously in a coma. It's in manga and I try to look for a trademark I recognise. Then I see it. It's so faint I nearly missed it. It's one of hers...

I try to speak and they all look up. They're suffocating me with their hugs now and I cry out in pain. It still hurts. Janet holds my hand and smiles at me. I look at her but she's not the one I want to see. I speak the one word. It's so faint. I can hardly speak. "Leanne" is all I can say. Janet gets up and walks off. I don't know where she's gone but I can tell she's not coming back. I don't mind. After all it's not her I want.

I come out of hospital a few days later but I still can't speak. They says it's a miracle that I even managed to say her name. They've not been able to get her to come. It's Christmas tomorrow. They let me go online and the names are all blurry. Only one of them is clear and I know who it is without even checking.

Leanne says:
Hiya grin.gif
Steven says:
Hiya
Leanne says:
How're you?
Steven says:
Better now. I still can't speak though sad.gif
Leanne says:
Awww...well I hope you can speak soon
Steven says:
Did you ever come and visit?
Leanne says:
I tried. They wouldn't let me in
Steven says:
Who?
Leanne says:
The doctors. They blame me...


I feel the rage building up in me. Because of the doctors I didn't get to see her...I start to cry and my sister comes in the room. She comforts me and looks at the conversation and realises. She tells me to go downstairs. I walk slowly downstairs carrying the board I've always to carry with me. It's like I'm mentally deformed. I have to use the board to speak. My sister comes down ten minutes later and tells me I can go back. I go upstairs and look at the conversation between me and Leanne. I scroll up to the bit I stopped at and read...

Steven says:
Hi. This is Steven's sis
Leanne says:
Hiya
Steven says:
Would you mind coming round sometime? We would really appreciate it
Leanne says:
Sure. If my mum will let me. How come you'll appreciate it?
Steven says:
Well Steven's been depressed lately and we're hoping that you'll cheer him up. You always seem to
Leanne says:
Brb. Need to ask my mum
Leanne says:
Back. She says yes. When?
Steven says:
Well tomorrow's Christmas so I doubt you can come over. Boxing Day?
Leanne says:
Sure happy.gif


I read the last bit and suddenly I feel invincible. I'll get to see Leanne again...and she's coming over. I can't believe it. We arrange to meet at Burger King (yet again) at half 11 on Boxing Day. I hear my mum shout on me and I run downstairs. My friends are all coming in for me seeing if I want to go to the cinema. My mum nods and my dad throws me my smosh jacket (I'm obsessed with smosh). I run upstairs and say goodbye. I log off and go to the cinema. We get to the cinema and I'm unable to contain my excitement. My friends laugh and soon it's like before. One of them hits me and I flinch.

"I'm so sorry. Are you ok?"
"Yes. Just a bit sore"
"I'm really sorry..."
"It's ok Gerard"
He returns my statement with a smile and walks ahead with Alyssa. They kiss and I look away. It's still too painful to think about. I'm regretting waking up now...

A bit of a crap chapter but I wanted to do Steven's POV again. Anyway...comments?

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