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Another Poem I wrote...
Date: Dec 22nd, 2006 8:36:29 am - Subscribe
Mood: Chasing Cars ( Snow Patrol )

I hurt too long
And long to hurt
I am as I have made myself
Which is what you have made me

I wish to control
Yet am submissive
and do not wish to change

What is wrong with who I am
I am not who I am
I conderject myself
Fore I have let the world mold me
Into what I am
All I long for now is to visit me!!

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mileyfan - December 22nd, 2006
thats a good poem

emogirlie - December 22nd, 2006
so... you're back with your ex... who has a baby with your best friend? WOW! That sounds like a soap opera! Is this correct??

rain_drop - December 22nd, 2006
what is wrong with who i am...i am not who i am....
exactly how i feel...another fantastic poem...i should work on writing more poems..but i know they won't turn out as good as urs. :/
~rain_drop

rain_drop - December 25th, 2006
ok..so i posted another poem of mine..but this one is more recent...it's kinda towards the end of a really long entry..but let me know what ya think. ok..hope u have a good christmas.
~rain_drop

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