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[today]Oct 23rd, 2006 4:42:05 pm - Subscribe

there is another side to me,
barely visible.

I hold a strength inside
unsuspected.

I would not expect you
to know,

but I
could challenge anything.

and I, had I a reason,
could lift the world up.

too proud am I
to lean on you now:

I will stand up
I will not fall.

and if I can't
see your star,

I'll find another
to guide me.

and, if you give me reason,
I will hold the world up.

I'll stand up,
I won't back down -

but oh, how I would rather
fall into your arms.

I would
take shelter in you

rather than hold up
this empty sky.

[I am]strong enough.
[inspiration]feels like the weight of the world.

[your thoughts]3

silentpoet

October 24th, 2006

i really like this one, especially the first couple of verses. Well done!

avatar indie-guy

October 25th, 2006

aw thank you very much!
i'm always trying new stuff and posting it. but lately school's been hogging most of my time.

i'm starting work on a new song tonight though. i'll let you know when i post it!

thanks again happy.gif
-dustin

avatar amendes

October 29th, 2006

love your site... both content and layout-wise.

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