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candle

[today]Jul 21st, 2006 9:45:00 pm - Subscribe


in
the room of my heart
firelight
makes shadows dance

wide awake
I move slowly
as though
I am dreaming

remaining still
lest you
dart past my hands
a frightened minnow

in
soft darkness
the city lights
your face

eyes
finding my own
breathing
upon embers

with this flame
upon the hearth
the room
is warm and safe

with you
inside my heart
my mind
is a different place

I fall
asleep
with your smile
on my lips

slowly
as though
dreaming
within a dream.

[I am]beginning to notice that I use fish as imagery in a lot of poems.
[inspiration]last night.

[your thoughts]4

avatar Zatherus

July 22nd, 2006

wow... You must really be in love with this person... That was very romantic... enjoyed it a lot... I love reading your stuff.. keep it up

Zatherus

avatar fiona

July 22nd, 2006

Is this the same person that the next poem is about?

avatar end-of

July 23rd, 2006

No. The next poem is about someone else entirely.

avatar fiona

July 23rd, 2006

good. PS for Sunday. I tried to make a comment on your poem today, but it said comments were OFF. I hope you don't have a migraine or like that. I hope you feel better soon.

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