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finally

[today]Apr 10th, 2009 2:03:26 pm - Subscribe

trying to
remember why

I
gave
this
up

draw a blank

voices echo

empty room

where my life was

all my poetry
in boxes
packed and ready
going nowhere

no one here
where I used to be

so they finally
took this
away from me?

[I am]empty

[your thoughts]1

avatar fiona

August 21st, 2009

I really do like your writing, and I am not just saying that--because ordinarily what passes for poetry from people is not anything but vanity, but you take a very minimum amount of words and construct very effective images in my mind. I also like how you have the mood fixed to say 'I am'

Do you journal anywhere else but here?

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