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on fire

[today]Jul 27th, 2006 1:42:38 am - Subscribe


sky's on fire; awash with
crimson and marigold

a beautiful picture -
from the window, inspiration strikes

gathering pencil, paint and easel
aiming
to capture the sun

the air is warm and still
barefoot, she runs
into the street;
enraptured by the sky

without thinking, onto the road
without looking

headlights -
sound breaks the barrier -
one moment, clear as glass

a sunset,
the world's requiem

a street awash in crimson
reflects the marigold sky

the sun
captured in blood

the light fades,
a silent song.

[I am]a little bit scared of myself.

[your thoughts]2

avatar Zatherus

July 27th, 2006

Alot darker to your other but very very well written... The comparison of the blood red road to the sky is really amazing... This is close to one of your better peices of literature...

Zatherus

dav

July 27th, 2006

Thank for the sharing, and sorry for all the pop up... think i be fine ba, nice to meet u

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