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a history of bad days.

[today]Sep 28th, 2006 4:08:54 am - Subscribe


I
am
imprisoned.

Trapped
by
your visions.

My time
is a waste
of yours.

I
am not
good enough.

If
you are
near,

my life
is a history
of bad days.

[I am]so far away.

 [your thoughts]2

blownblue

September 29th, 2006
Tx a lot four your welcome words

Would u be a poet happy.gif
That sounds great
I write too

I'm french, pleased to meet you end-of

silentpoet

October 15th, 2006
I like how the isolation of each line adds to the tone of the poem. It makes each verse more meaningful without unnecessary words

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