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your thorn.


[today]Jan 30th, 2007 6:54:35 am - Subscribe

you turn
your face
away from me;

say I make you
sick -

I make you sick.

and with only words,
you make me into
the thorn.

I, the illness
that twists your stomach;

I,
the venom
that poisons your breath;

I speak as
your treacherous,
torturous disease:

oh, god,
what I'd give to be
free of your veins.

oh, my enemy and creator,
the thorn in your skin

would die to
return to its vine
and just be.

[I am]prickly.

[your thoughts]2

avatar femmeemo

January 30th, 2007

See. Words are power. Why do people need weapons, other than those they posses orally? It is actually amazing how a single phrase can change your outlook upon life.

I like your writing very much.
-Femme.

avatar emogirlie

January 31st, 2007

Nice. I like it too.

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