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the turning of leaves.


[today]Sep 21st, 2006 4:40:06 pm - Subscribe


I open my window
to the sunlight

as a dandelion turns
to the morning.

but time
is against me,

and autumn whispers
of the leaves that fall.

in white winter's grasp
all is still.

I am but a spark
beneath frozen earth

asleep
under opal blankets.

into the winter,
I follow the sun

far beyond
the horizon.

[I am]poetic.
[inspiration]September.

[your thoughts]6

axa

September 21st, 2006

Ohh. Very pretty. I like this a lot.

<3
AxA

avatar thesane

September 21st, 2006

This is very nice and it some very good work of any I have seen and it realaxes me reading it thnkx for letting me enjoy it.

avatar emogirlie

September 21st, 2006

nice. like a balmy breeze happy.gif

anonymous

September 22nd, 2006

a very serene feeling in my opinion. mind if i ask for your email?

mine's benjamin_teoh@hotmail.com

kai here btws. =D

tear

September 22nd, 2006

Thank you much for ur comment. Lovely poetry

end-of

September 22nd, 2006

Thank you, one and all!
Kai, my email address is imaginary_angel03@hotmail.com. I added you to my msn to see if you had it. Thanks for all your comments, everyone. Really - you have no idea how much it means happy.gif

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