not sure why i wrote this
Date: Sep 30th, 2004 1:02:28 pm - Subscribe
Mood: deep


Will Someone Catch me on my way down?

Standing at the cliff
Looking at my fall
Thinking
Will someone save me?
Will someone catch me on my way down?

Standing next to me
Looking at my life
Wondering
Was it worth nothing?
Was it a waste of time?

Standing at the edge
Looking at the breaking waves
Feeling
Loose stones stumbling down the rocks to the water below
A gust of wind attempting to pull me back

Standing with arms outstretched
Leaning over on my toes
Falling
Will someone save me?
Will someone catch me on my way down?

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shine - September 30th, 2004
great job on the writing !!! u have a talent in writing poetry... my name is clarkand u should check out my site as well.. my sn is "shine." cya babe!!


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