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Jan 24th, 2006 8:22:18 pm - Subscribe |
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ok i think i posted this before, idk but it's a poem for school. i need to make revisions to turn it in for my portfolio but have no idea what to change. PLEASE!!! give me suggestions. don't just say it's good. i need FEEDBACK PEOPLE! thanks.  ***sry*** ***....poem removed...*** **due to certain circumstances*** |
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broknangel |
January 24th, 2006 |
| i wish i could help!!! it just seems...perfect the way it is | ||
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misty_rain |
January 24th, 2006 |
| I think it's good too. | ||
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rain_drop |
January 24th, 2006 |
| but i can't turn it in without making changes..as the famous quote at our school is..."only death ends the revision process" thanks anyways. -me- | ||
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david |
January 24th, 2006 |
| Urm, it was really great would be cool if there was more to it. | ||
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perfect110 |
January 25th, 2006 |
| Maybe change rescueing me to rescue me... I donno- like more of a plea? or something... I think it's really good though- that's the only thing I could think of. perfect~ | ||
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broknangel |
January 26th, 2006 |
| here is the html...i hope it only shows the and not the whole thing lol <MARQUEE bgcolor="#33CCFF" loop="-1" scrollamount="2" width="100%"> YOUR TEXT HERE </MARQUEE> |
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perfect110 |
January 28th, 2006 |
| yeah I know... I keep going back and forth- because I really don't want to do it, but I know I have to... it's just me being stubborn. I will try to keep in touch as much as possible, and fill you in on how I am doing... I also wanna keep up with what's going on with you =) good luck rain_drop. Thank you for all you have done for me. later~perfect~ | ||
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