The Counting Game (Being Reworked)
Date: Mar 18th, 2006 7:16:07 pm - Subscribe
Mood: meh


 One...
Two...
Three...motherfucker...
Four...
Five...
Six, six shots to kill the world.

The revolver of the revolution is a powerless piece,
A weapon to those who use it.
An idea, that behind the men,
Is a stone that stands against the pen as they lose it.

Confuse me,
Abuse me,
But I'll come back to finish things off.

Kill me,
Spill me,
But I'll come back to finish you off.

The man is invincible,
The man is invulnerable.
But that man doesn't exist.

Seven,
Eight,
Nine, nine blades to slit his wrist.
Comments: (4)

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femmeemo - March 20th, 2006
It is just a test.
Testing one, two, three...
This is just a fucking test,
Testing Lung Capacity.

CHOKE!!!!

test...test...

-Femme.
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true_audio - March 20th, 2006
lol, I guess you're right, as it is pretty bad. I'd take it down, but that'd be me refusing to expose my failures. Thanks, heh.
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femmeemo - May 03rd, 2006
No, sorry I really liked it. I was just being stupid. It reminded me of some dumb song I was singing all afternoon of my own creation.

Sorry if it came across as nasty criticism... I really like the numericism, it flows nicely!

-Femme.
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true_audio - May 03rd, 2006
Heh, don't worry then. I still think it could be done better. tounge.gif

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