The Audiomancer

Freedom?
Date: Jun 1st, 2006 6:59:39 pm - Subscribe
Mood: meh


Such explicit things
As my form is tingling.
Forced against my will,
I shall remain here ever watching...
Waiting...
Waiting for that moment,
With all of its sweet serene freedom.
Free me...
From all of this!

Please forgive me,
For I'm not well.
I've been a tad eccentric,
Since I was sent into-

Ever burning, ever bright.
Hazing together night and daybreak,
For God's sake.
These chains are chafing,
My bloody wrists.
I cannot seem to take
All of this punishment.

I've been here for so long,
Every last bit of hope is gone.
Every ounce of my strength has left,
All of the screams have left me deaf.
My sleepless eyes remain bloodshot,
But my sight's all that I got.
And I'd give that all just to be free.

Please forgive me,
For I'm not well.
I've been a tad eccentric,
Since I was sent into hell.
Can you excuse me?
I'm not at by best.
So please, just get away from me!

Free me, but leave me alone. x 4

Please forgive me,
For I'm not well.
I've been a tad eccentric,
Since I was sent into hell.
Can you excuse me?
I'm not at by best.
So please, just get away from me!

Free me, but leave me alone!
Comments: (2)

the_author - June 06th, 2006 i really, really like this one. wow, i can see your lyrics changing, evolving, and thats what i like to see. this work is so much more lyrically free than your very first ones, the words seem to be alot more comfortably chosen. i like the chorus, its almost sarcastic, and its angry, sort of quirky, its good. the first stanza is very artistic.

the_author - June 14th, 2006 so, I'm reading this again, and the only words I can muster up at the moment are "holy" and "shit!". I really enjoy this song. Id like to see it composed, cause damn!

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