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Wow... this time it's a little darker.

Nov 26th, 2005 4:36:33 pm - Subscribe

I haven't been here in a whileee. Well I did race in state hurt ankle and all we came in 2nd in the state and missed 1st by one second. I was impressed. Well here's another entry 'cause I don't have much to write about.

Well I did go to my first funeral recently. Here is a little something on it::

The resounding presence of nothing.
The dark depths of eternity.
Plummeting, spiraling into the horrifically empty abyss.
Here lies the womb of all nightmares.
The torn flesh of reality cries of innocent ravaged victims fill this cavernous place.
Volcanoes cover the molten floor spewing forth blood and bone.
Some say death has no sound.
But pain has a sound.
Hopelessness has a sound.
Guttural screams of fury most certianly has a sound.
This is the sound of abandon, the sound of death.


Ones of my better writings I do have to say so myself tell me what you think <3 I love what you have to say [=
mood: bemused
(2) comments

she_burns

November 26th, 2005

Hey, that's an extremely good poem. My first funeral was my ex's in september. So that rang true in a few areas.

<3 Jackie

avatar xbang_bang

December 01st, 2005

Thank you.

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