peoms from my bleeding hear
Date: May 24th, 2005 10:33:34 am - Subscribe
Mood: unworthy
here's a poem i did its rubbish but writting helps me cope with my emotions...

pain smothers me, a soft black veil,
covered in its cold confort, lonley and tired,
death is the only confort for my bleeding heart...

its a work in progress,sorry its so shit sad.gif


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mutantdisc - May 24th, 2005
I've read worst poems. This one is pretty decent--theres always room for improvement. Just have fun with the shit you make buddy.

--See

xxbrokenx - May 24th, 2005
thanks for that means a lot to hear that. xX~broken~soul~Xx
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trashy_clo - May 24th, 2005
Thanks for your comment, I think if I had Funeral for a friend playing some place near me, I'd just go regardless of whether I was allowed out or not!
Your poem is coming along nicely, just don't forget to finish it wink.gif grin.gif
Chloe

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